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    Post by decayedFairytale* on Thu Mar 12, 2009 8:17 pm

    TITLE: Mr. Brightside
    AUTHOR: Me again
    CHARACTERS: Danny. Tom, Harry, Dougie, and more…
    DISCLAIMER: I do not own McFLY or not related to any of them…. And one more thing, I don’t own The Killers’ song
    SUMMARY: Another fic featuring Danny---lead again. Danny Brightside is called as an almost perfect lad. He’s smart, he’s nice, kind, good-looking, friendly, but most of the time, quiet. He got a younger brother, named Dougie Brightside. Dougie, like Danny, is also good-looking, friendly, and quiet. But something happened…

    NOTE: ONLY A FAN FICTION. OTHER CHARACTERS ARE FICTIONAL. AND I’M GRAMATICALLY INCORRECT, SWEAR. And one more thing, never mind the spelling errors.

    Chapter 1


    Danny Brightside. An almost perfect guy. Everyone’s idolizing him. Since he was 3, many people already loved him. But Danny didn’t change. He, still, wanted to live a very ordinary life and wanted to be like everyone else around him. On the other hand, Dougie Brightside, Danny’s younger brother, is a quiet, and sometimes, cold person. He’s silently jealous of Danny’s popularity. Back when Danny’s 10 and Dougie’s 9 years old~~~

    Danny, along with Dougie, went home with 3 Medals in his bag. He tried to hide it from his parents because they’ll just put their attention to him again. But unfortunately, they saw it…


    “DANNY! Medals again! You’re really doing very well!”

    There he goes again. I think it’s already the 20th time Father told me that I really doing very well. (Breathe deeply) Wonder when he will stop telling me that phrase…

    “Look Dougie, look at these medals. You should have at least one of it to make me become proud of you.”

    Dougie is silent. He innocently stared at the medals,like he never knew what kind of thing their father’s holding.

    “Ahh... But the question is, are you going to have a medal like this someday?”

    Now that hurts. Can father treat us equally?

    “Father---“ I didn’t finished what I’m going to say because Mother opens her mouth, like she wanted to tell him something

    “Enough, Roger. You just always compare Dougie to Danny. When will you stop comparing them? Dougie may not bringing medals when he went home from school, but he also got something special that Danny may not have.”

    “Like what?!” Father blurted out

    Mother can’t say a thing because Dougie is a little bit secretive. But I also felt there is something that he can do that I can’t do.

    “See, NONE! That kid can’t do something special!”

    “He’s not just a kid, Roger! He’s our son!”

    “Oh yeah? (Pause and while walking away, he shouted) Son? C’mon!”

    Another quarrel because of us, Father always treat Dougie like he was a nobody for him. Wait, I heard what Father shouted. What does it means?

    “It’s alright, Dougie. Your father is just---“ Mom tried to compliment him but he ran towards his room

    “Mum, about what Father shouted---“ I stopped because of the feeling that mother will become mad at me, but when I look at her eyes, it was still the same kind, open-minded, blue eyes of Mum.

    “What about your father shouted?” She asked me pleasantly

    “Is Father wanted to point out that---(Took a deep breath) Dougie and we, don’t have the same blood?”

    “What do you mean? That Dougie is not your brother?”

    “No… I mean--- Yeah---”

    “Danny, (Approached me and put her hands on my shoulders) Dougie is your brother. The only conflict is, you don’t have the same father.”

    I was surprised. Is that the reason why Father is always hot-headed when it comes to Dougie?

    “Sorry if it’s too late to tell you about this. I’m just looking for a perfect timing to tell you---“

    “Perfect Timing?!” Dougie asked Mum, surprisingly and sobbing “Now I know why he hates me very much”

    Dougie went back to his room. Mum followed him and kept crying his name. While me,standing, feeling sympathetic for Dougie. If only our neighbors can see what’s happening inside our home, they’ll know how broken my family was, how imperfect my life was.

    After a while, their father went to Dougie’s room, and saw their Mum apologizing to Dougie. Then Danny heard loud voice from his father after almost 15 minutes.

    What’s happening inside? Father’s shouting again?

    Danny went to the room. And he saw another very sad scene. Dougie’s crying while their Father, looks like he wanted to hit Dougie very hard, and their Mother always block his hand even though she already felt hurt. After a day~~~

    It is Saturday. Every week, I always see Mother on the front of the stove, cooking breakfast, while Dad, in the Living Room, sitting on a sofa, reading a newspaper, and Dougie, slouching on the 4th chair from the left in the Dining Room. But today, there’s no one in the Dining Room, even in the Living Room. I went outside to look for them and I saw Mother, shouting Dougie’s name, and Father, talking to a Police.

    “Father, what’s happening? Where’s---Where’s Dougie?” I asked

    “Dougie’s missing.” Father answered my question straight.

    “WHAT?!”

    “Your mother saw a note on the Dining Table. It says that Dougie left the house all by himself. (Sighs) Even though some of the words were misspelled, your mother understood what’s written on it.”

    C’mon! Dougie’s already missing but Father’s still underestimating him!

    “But, why? Why he would leave us?”

    “I don’t know! And I don’t care! He just give us problems and headaches!”

    I can’t take it. Dougie and Father may not have the same blood but Dougie is already a part of the family. I should look for him. As his older brother, it’s one of my responsibilities, to take care of my younger brother.


    ----

    chorba kasi ni jj eh, ang daming pinopost na story XD comment kau..


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    Chapter 2


    I thought it would be easy to find him since Dougie’s just 9 years old, but he’s unpredictable. I never thought he can hide like this. After school, I always give away some posters that Harry made (A friend of mine who’s very good in making signs, posters, and banners). But no one went to our home to tell us that they already found Dougie. No one’s calling too. (Sighs) Where are you Dougie?

    After 8 years, Danny’s already in his last year in High School. Yet, they still did’t find Dougie~~~

    First day of that School Year…

    I woke up 5:52 in the morning, 8 minutes before my alarm would ring. Eight. The number eight. Oh, now I remembered, it’s the 8th year we---I mean, I, I’m looking for Dougie. But still, he’s still out of my sight. (Pause) Am I still going to wait for my alarm to ring even if I’m already woken up? (Sighs) Maybe not

    Danny already readied for school. And used his Bicycle to go to school. When he arrives~~~

    “DANNY!!! Hello! How’s the vacation?”

    “Mr.Brightside! It’s nice to see you again!”

    “Good morning Danny, you’re already 18, can you already have a girlfriend?”

    Okay. Thousands of greetings from different people in school. I don’t even know majority of them… Until I heard a familiar voice coming from my back. I slowly turned my head tot see who is it… and…

    “Danny! You’re height increased!”

    Oh, it’s Harry.

    “Hi Harry, what’s up?”

    “Me? Oh, my parents already built a Graphics Shop for me. That’s why this last vacation, I have a big pot of bucks. You?”

    “Here, still looking for Dougie.”

    “What?! C’mon Danny, it’s already 8 years since Dougie disappeared. You still don’t give up?”

    “Of course not. He’s my brother---“

    “I thought it’s half brother?”

    “Oh yeah, he’s my half brother. But still, he’s a part of our family…”

    “Aww… sweet. I wish I also have a brother like you. But anyway, let’s go check out our classmates!”

    And we went to our classroom. Many greeted us---I mean, greeted me. I looked for a better seat and sat on the 2nd seat while Harry’s on the 1st seat on the 2nd row. And a guy behind me talked to me.

    “Hi Danny, my name is Tom.” And he shook hands with me. I smile because, um, frankly, I don’t know him

    “Oh, Tom, nice to meet you. How do you know my name?”

    “You’re the unbeatable top student in our batch that’s why it’s impossible no one didn’t know you.”

    “Really?”

    “Yeah. You know what, I’m one of your biggest fans. I idolized you so much. I want to be like you someday.”

    “Oh---“ I can’t say a word. That’s how popular I am. Even this guy seated on my back idolizes me---Then Harry whispers a kind of questionable words to me…

    “Maybe he likes you”

    I would really love to punch Harry but it’s one thing I can’t do to anyone, so far... Instead, I just reply…

    “No, maybe he likes you”

    “Oh shut up! I admit that I’m really a very good-looking guy but, um---“

    “Sh, our teacher’s already there”

    So our adviser arrived to give us an orientation. Another orientation. He introduces some new classmates including the guy behind me---or maybe it would be better if I call him---um, Tom. Yeah, Tom ‘coz it’s his name. Then more, more, more new classmates introduced themselves, but there is one person who weirdly caught my attention. There is something inside me that tells me this person is so special.

    “Good morning folks. I’m Anna…”

    Anna. Her name is Anna, a very enchanting name… Then she stares at me and smiles. I’m so captivated. Then everyone also stares at me---no, no, they’re not looking at me. They’re looking at the door. Oh, a group of late classmates. They’re smiling at Anna too. Maybe her friends (Sighs) then our adviser let them in since it’s the first day of this school year… and after some time, break time~~~ 10 seconds after our teacher left the room, Harry pulled me hastily to the Cafeteria…

    “Hey, Harry, let me guess, you’re hungry” I told him jokingly

    “Nah… I just want to eat with those lovely girls we know several minutes ago”

    “Huh? You mean those who are late?”

    “Uh… Yeah, if that’s how you want to call them---Oh, wait, they’re there! Let’s go!”

    Harry ran to the table where those girls sat.

    “Oh, *ahem, ahem* I’m Harry, I’m one of your new classmates---“

    “Harry… what a nice name! (Smiles)” A girl with orange hair exclaimed

    “Oh, really? Thanks… By the way, can we sit here?”

    “We? What do you mean of we?”

    “I’m with my… friend---wait, where is he?” Harry look around to find me and he found me on the Cashier.

    Harry should buy food first before looking for a seat, right? --- And he went to the Cashier…

    “Hey Danny, why you leave me there?”

    “The food is the main reason why there’s a Cafeteria in this school, not to become close to new classmates”

    “Okay, another Danny principle. (Laughs)”

    Still, we eat on the table where those girls sit… I didn’t notice it at first, but Tom is also on that table. And he’s beside Anna… Wait, no, no, I’m not jealous! I think…

    “So, you guys already heard my name lately, so here’s my friend---“

    “Danny, Danny Brightside” Tom said “We’re talking about him lately”

    I smile. Tom said ‘we’ so Anna’s included. Or, well, I think so.

    “By the way, I’m Brenda” the girl with orange hair introduced herself

    “And I’m Maggie” the girl next to Anna and Brenda

    “You already know who I am” It’s Tom

    “And I’m Anna”

    “Yeah, I know” I accidentally said. Everyone’s looking at me suspiciously. I mean, suspiciously, in a nice way. “I mean---I remembered your name because when you’re introducing yourself, your friends went in and… yeah, I remembered your name” I blushed. I felt so embarrassed.

    “It’s okay. Actually, I feel fortunate ‘coz a guy like you know my name”

    Because of that, I became red as a tomato.

    “Look at you Danny. You’re blushing!” Brenda shouted

    “Who? Danny? Blushing? OH YEAH! DANNY! FOR THE FIRST TIME! YOU’RE BLUSHING BECAUSE OF A GIRL!” Harry exclaimed

    Everyone inside the Cafeteria look at Danny.

    “Stop it. Everyone’s looking at me now” I whispered to Harry

    “Okay---hey people! We’re just joking! Back to your own businesses now!”

    (Breathes deeply) I agree with Harry. It’s the first time I blushed because of a girl… No way, we just met each other this morning. It’s impossible I’m already---already---already falling for her


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    Chapter 3


    And then we continue eating.

    “By the way, who wants to buy dessert?” Brenda asked

    “Oh, me, I want to buy! Let’s go---“ Harry replied

    Looks like Harry and Brenda are going to be close friends---

    “How about you, Danny, do you like to buy dessert?” Brenda asked me. Eh? I thought Harry and Brenda are going to be close friends. And yeah, another girl who likes me---

    “Hey, Danny, do you like one? I would buy it for you” And Brenda smiles. Harry suddenly stared at me angrily. Maybe Harry likes Brenda… and he’s jealous

    “Um… Brenda, I appreciate your ‘kindness’, but I’m not really into desserts… Um… Harry likes one. He loves desserts.” Maybe Harry will take off his scary eyes on me and become happy---and as expected, he smiles. Now I know, he likes Brenda.

    “So, Harry, do you like an Orange-flavored Ice Cream?”

    What? Orange-flavored Ice Cream? I never heard such flavor. Oh no, Harry’s smile suddenly disappeared. I think Brenda will offer him another flavor of Ice Cream but stopped when Harry said---

    “Orange-flavored Ice Cream is one of the best Ice Cream ever! Do you like it too?”

    “Of course! It’s obvious that I like that, just look at my hair. (Laughs)”

    “Oh, yeah, I forgot. (Laughs) So, let’s go?” And Brenda nods

    And they left to buy that ‘Orange-flavored Ice Cream’. All left on that table is speechless.

    “I don’t know there is an Orange-flavored Ice Cream.” Tom said

    “So do I.” I agreed

    “But you know what, they’re look so cute together!” Maggie suddenly cheered

    “Yeah, maybe Harry will be Brenda’s last boyfriend.” Anna’s voice melts me. She’s so cute and lovely…

    “Wait a minute, what do you mean of Brenda’s last boyfriend?” I asked Maggie---Coz I can’t really look to Anna.

    “Oh, because Brenda always got a boyfriend and after 1 week or 2 weeks of relationship, she will break up with him. That’s why when we saw that Harry and Brenda got a very cute chemistry, we hope that he will be her last boyfriend.”

    “(Nodding) Ah… Okay…”

    “By the way, does anyone already heard about the upcoming School Play?” Tom suddenly questions

    “What? It’s just the first day of this School Year! How come there’s already a Play?” A very blunt comment from Maggie

    Maggie looks like she doesn’t like that Play, but Anna smiles---

    “Play? I love Plays! When is the Audition? What’s the play all about?” Anna looks like she really wants plays.

    “I heard that the Drama Club didn’t release any dates yet, even what’s the play all about.”

    “Oh… okay…” Anna pouts. And I want to compliment her…

    “A---“ I didn’t continue what I’m going to say since Tom started talking, again…

    “Speaking of clubs, what club or clubs you guys plan to try out? Me, I want to try the Book Society” So Tom is to Book Society

    “Hmm… I think I want to be in Arts Club. I love drawing.” Then Maggie is to Arts Club. I’m waiting for Anna’s answer---

    “I want to be in---“ She stopped talking because Brenda and Harry arrived. Aww... What a bad timing.

    “Wait, are you chatting about clubs? I want to be in Band Club coz I love, love, love Drums!” Brenda shouted. Guess what? Harry also like Drums, I can see it in his eyes that he’s happy Brenda ‘also’ like drums. And then Tom asked Anna to continue what she’s going to say. She smiles at him and told him that she also wants to be in Book Society.

    Me too! I love books. Wait, how am I going to say it? If I told them that I also want to be in Book Society, they will tease me again because Anna just said she wants to be in Book Society. And I was surprised when she asked me---

    “How about you, Mr. Brightside, what club do you want to join?” She really has a very sweet voice. And her eyes, really captivates me. Her eyes... her eyes... her eyes---wait! She’s waiting for my answer. What am I going to tell her?

    “Danny loves Books. When he didn’t have something to do, he always has a book on his hand.” Am I going to thank Harry or hit him? Another bad timing, but, well (sighs), I guess I should just tell him ‘thank you’ for saving me from being tease again in front of Anna. Thanks Harry

    “Oh, you should also join the Book Society, Danny” Anna told me, and smiles

    “Y-Y-Y-Yeah... you’re right. Maybe I should---“ And the School Bell rings. I forgot! We’re still in school and it’s still Break Time. And we go back to our room. Like what other teachers do during the first day of school, our next teacher also introduced herself to the class. Well, the introduction of our teacher is so long and I got bored, for the first time. And fall asleep. I dreamt about something...

    I am running on a field. A field located in the middle of nowhere. And I saw a guy facing his back on me. I pat him. But he didn’t react. I check out who is that guy, and I’m surprised. It’s Dougie. He smiles at me, and slowly walks away. I can’t follow him because I can’t move my feet. All I can do is to watch him leaving and shouts his name...

    “DOUGIE!” I exclaimed. Everyone inside our room look at me. But I don’t care. All I think about that time is Dougie. It’s the first time Dougie appeared on my dream. (Sighs) Lots of First Time...

    “Mr. Brightside, are you alright?” Our teacher asked me. Well, I just told her I’m alright though inside my mind, there’s a lot of questions popped out... When we’re dismissed---

    “Danny, what’s happening?” Harry asked me.

    “What do you mean of ‘What’s Happening’?”

    “Oh c’mon! I know if there’s something wrong, Dan. We’re friends for almost a decade now. C’mon, tell me, what’s wrong?”

    “I fell asleep during class, right?”

    “Right. And you shouted Dougie’s name.”

    “Yeah... because he appeared on my dream”

    “So?”

    “For the first time ever, Dougie appeared in my dream---”

    “EH?! SERIOUSLY?!”

    “Seriously...”

    “And you’re not happy?”

    “Since Dougie existed in this world, he never been in my dreams...”

    “Well, at least, now ‘he’ did. You should be glad...”

    “(Sighs) You’re right. I should be---“ Danny’s eyes widened.

    “Hey, what’s up?”

    “She’s there. She’s alone...”

    “Who? Who is she?”

    “Anna...”

    “What, do you want to follow her?”

    “No, no, no... I don’t want to be a Stalker!”

    “It’s okay if you follow her. Just make sure you wouldn’t do anything bad to her.”

    “(Sighs) Seriously, is it okay to follow her when she’s alone?” I repeat my question to Harry. And when I turn around, instead of him, I saw Tom...

    “HEY DANNY! What are you doing here alone?”

    “Alone? I’m with—I’m with---“

    Oh no, Tom’s voice is too loud and Anna heard him. She turned and saw us. Well, at least, instead of suspecting me, she greets me... I mean... us

    “You’re already there, can you join with me to our home?” She asked us. Tom immediately told her ‘yeah’, while me... well...

    “Is it okay?”

    “Of course, you’re not going to do anything bad, right? I can see it that both of you are good guys.”

    Really? Aww... And she smiles. I want to jump because of happiness, but then again, I didn’t do such thing, ‘so far’...


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    nice story admin^__^


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    Chapter 4



    I can’t believe it... I’m going to her home... Tom suddenly stopped walking and told us that he forgot something. Well, yeah, so, it’s me and Anna only...

    “So—How are you, Danny?”

    “How I am?”

    “Because during class you fell asleep, and shouted the word ‘Dougie’”

    “It’s not just a word, it’s a name.”

    “Oh, sorry...” Anna pouts...

    “No, no, it’s okay” Well, I guess it can take away her pout and change it into a smile...

    “Really?” And she smiles “By the way, who is that Dougie?”

    “Oh? Dougie? He’s my brother, my long lost brother...”

    “Your long lost brother?” I feel that Anna suddenly become serious.

    “Yeah... he’s missing for 8 years now...”

    “Eight years? And you’re still looking for him?”

    I nod. Then I look at her. Her eyes, again—her eyes are so adorable. But they’re sad, I knew it...

    “Anna, are you okay?”

    “Yeah... It was just... Never mind it...”

    What did I say that made her that sad?

    “By the way Danny, maybe we can separate here, I just have something to do...”

    “Oh sure...”

    It’s really weird. I think she’s keeping something from me. But I don’t have the rights to know what is it, if there’s really one, because we just know each other this morning... Well, I guess I should try to become closer to her... UGH!!! What’s happening to me? I think I’m paranoid, I think...

    The next morning...

    I feel sleepy... I can’t really sleep well last night that’s why *yawns*... Phew! Anna really made me a little bit different from my old self...

    Danny used his bicycle again but because he’s sleepy, he lost balance and fell on the middle of the road, and a car will hit Danny...

    A guy in hood suddenly blocks the car from hitting Danny. That guy assists Danny on getting up but Danny can’t see his face because he’s still sleepy and the guy’s hood covered his face... When Danny already can stood up by himself, the guy immediately went away...

    That guy... Made me remember “Blood is thicker than water”... No way, do I mean that that guy—is Dougie? I called him because maybe he will come back but... he didn’t...

    After a while, Danny arrived at school...

    “Hey Danny, you’re not with your bike?” Harry again

    “I was almost hit by a car....”

    “What?”

    “Someone block the car from hitting me... And I felt that it’s Dougie...”

    “HUWAT?!?!?! DOUGIE?!?! What did you do? Do you talk to him? Did you get his number? How did you know that it’s Dougie?”

    I found Harry annoying when he asked me those questions... but the last question, made me think...

    “The last question... I don’t know... Intuition, I think...” Harry stares at me for 10 seconds and—

    “Oh my God, Danny, what’s happening to you?”

    “What, what’s wrong?”

    “You slept late?”

    “Oh, about that... ye—”

    “Is it connected to Anna?”

    “Hey, about that, you leave me alo—”

    “Answer my question, Danny...”

    “Uh... eh... we—“

    “I knew it! You’re in love that’s why you become a weirdo”

    “Me? In love? C’mon! We just met yester—“

    “You’re blushing”

    UGH! Harry always prevent me from continuing what am I going to say— “Eh? Bl—Blushing? I am blushing?” Actually, he’s right, I feel like I’m blushing and I really feel so warm...

    “Yes yes yes, you are and it’s because of Anna, for sure...

    AAAHH!!! I can’t take it... In my 18 years of living, I never become crazy like this!

    “Good morning guys!” Brenda greeted cheerfully

    “Hey Brends, you want an Ice Cream again?” Harry asked Brenda

    “Oh sure, by the way, I will show something”

    Harry left me alone, again. But this time, I am really alone. I mean, Tom’s not around—

    “Good Morning Mr. Brightside!” Um... It’s Tom. Maybe I should forgot what I just said that Tom’s not around.

    “Good Morning, too”

    “How are you, you looked so tired?”

    “Oh, it’s nothing... I just didn’t sleep well last night...”

    “Ahh... Thinking about something?””

    “Not really—”

    “Danny, do you like Anna?”

    I’m not surprised that he asked me that question, I’m surprised because he’s serious. Tom, don’t tell me you like her...


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    Chapter 5



    “Why Tom? Because you like her?”

    Tom suddenly laughed out loud—weird

    “Hey, Tom, answer my question”

    “Don’t tell me you’re jealous? You don’t need to be jealous Brightside, I will never, ever, like Anna…”

    He’s very confident that he will not fall for her… I know I should become happy but it’s—it’s weird, really weird

    “Hey, Tom, how can you assure that you will never fall for her?”

    “How? Oh, (Pause) simple. Because you like her” And smiles

    “What?”

    “You like her, right? It’s obvious…” And Tom continue walking

    That’s it? Just because I like her? Tom looks like he’s keeping something from me… And I felt that it’s connected to Anna… Well, I think I should find out what’s it. And I guess I need to hurry up a little because the bell is ringing…

    “Good morning class. Our lesson for today is…”

    Our first subject today is History. For the past several years of my school life, if the subject is History, I’m always up to it, but… no, not this time. There are really a lot of things that keep bothering me. First, the guy who helped me this morning, I really felt that it’s Dougie but I don’t have any proof. Second, that “something” Anna did last night. And third, Tom’s reason why he will never like Anna. (Sighs) What’s happening to my life? Everything’s confusing and unclear… Then someone from the outside of our room shouted…

    “EVERYONE HAS A SECRET!”

    Yeah, that “someone” is kind of scandalous, but what he shouted made me bother more. He’s right. Everyone has a secret. Even I do have a secret, even Harry… maybe Anna also have. I really want to know what’s her secret… but how?

    ~Break time, again~

    “Hey, Danny, only biscuits and milk?” Harry asked me

    “I’m not really in mood of eating a lot right now”

    “Oh? Really? Why? Is it because of Anna?”

    “Harry, do you think Anna is keeping something from me?”

    “C’mon Danny! Of course she will. Both of you didn’t know each other well, yet.”

    “But it really bothers me!”

    “You’re just paranoid because finally you’re first love came”

    “Love?!”

    “Yeah, I think, you just don’t like her, you love her.”

    “What—“

    “Shh, Anna, Brenda, and Maggie are arriving”

    “Morning guys! Maybe we can share table with you…” Brenda sat beside Harry and smiled to each other. Oh well, maybe they’re… you know

    “By the way, what’s up with you guys?” Brenda asked us

    “I’m currently planning a celebration” Harry speak out and smiles scarily at me

    “Hey, what does it mean?” I asked Harry with a very shaky voice

    “Harry, the celebration’s for what?” Maggie suddenly asked him

    “Because someone around finally is falling in love”

    “Who?” Maggie again

    “Danny”

    Everyone around shouted my name. They can’t believe what Harry just said—that I’m already falling in love.

    “Really? To whom?” Oh no, it’s Anna…

    “To—“ I covered Harry’s mouth.

    “To milk! I’m falling in love to milk. That’s why my beverage now is milk.” That’s the most unsophisticated reason I ever give in my entire whole life…

    “To milk? I thought you’re falling in love for Anna” Brenda blurted out

    “What? To Anna?” Maggie looks like she’s very surprised

    “Harry told me that Anna and Danny are together last night” Harry—because you told that to Brenda… I knew it… there’s already something between Harry and Brenda… I think…

    “Sorry Dan” Harry apologized with a very wide smile… yeah, that’s what he called an apology…

    “By the way, Maggie looks like uneasy, is it jealousy?” Brenda again!

    “Jealousy? What, Maggie likes Danny?” Harry asked Brenda

    “Nah! Do you know that, Maggie accidentally shouted out to us one time that she likes Anna when they first met each other?” Brenda and Harry are really compatible… Wait, MAGGIE LIKES ANNA?!

    “It’s—I told you, it’s not really what you think—I mean—It’s not that serious… I’m just—she’s sweet and everything. And I’m not a lesbian… And—she’s a girl… We’re just—we’re just—the best of friends right now, right Anna?” Maggie surely looks so nervous

    “Yeah, so it’s not really an issue so forget about it. And to Brenda, can you please be quiet?” Whoa, Anna’s kind of scary at that time… Maybe because the ‘Maggie-likes-Anna’ thing is not really a big matter to her and just like what Maggie said, they’re just best friends…

    “Scary” Harry whispers

    I can’t speak any word. Nothing’s coming out of my mouth. I’m speechless of what I just knew… Tom suddenly approached Anna and whispers something to her…

    “Hey, what’s happening?” Maggie asked Anna

    “We’re going to join the Book Society now” Tom answered

    “You Danny, do you want to join?” Anna asked me. Well, at least when she asked me that time, she’s back to the “Sweet” Anna

    “Oh, sure…”

    And we go to the ‘venue’


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    chapter 5 na kagad..cpag mu admin!!


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    [FM] LyLe wrote:chapter 5 na kagad..cpag mu admin!!

    nasa chapter 15 na nga ito sa McFLY Philippines eh XD


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    wao!!..gawa mu tlga toh?^^


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    [FM] LyLe wrote:wao!!..gawa mu tlga toh?^^

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    Chapter 6



    “Wow, I never thought there’s a lot of people who loves to join the Book Society!” Anna cheerfully shouted out

    “Well, majority of them loves to join just because of Danny Brightside” A guy told us

    “Eh? Just because of Danny?” Tom asked

    “Yeah… The news that Mr. Brightside loves Books and there’s a possibility that he will join the Book Society spread out like an epidemic.”

    Another so-called “Brightside” Fever which is kind of—or sometimes really—annoying. Fortunately, no one notices me, so far—

    “Danny! Finally, you’re here! You know what, I love Books especially Beethoven’s!” Beethoven? Are you joking?

    “Mr. Brightside, I’m a big bookworm. I always read the”Ugly Betty”!” Is it a book? I thought it’s a TV Show—

    “Hey Danny! Can you read a book to me someday like “Crazy Little Thing Called Love”?” Oh my Goodness. It’s a song.

    UGH! They saw me and kept telling me things with the word “Book” even though some—or all—of the things that they said are not really books. And one more thing, I don’t know every single one of them…

    “Hello students! If you want to become a member of Book Society, you should answer the following questions in front of everyone else…” The teacher-in-charge announced “You still have time to back out or think of your answer to these questions—“

    There are a lot of questions. And I’m not sure if I can answer them all—or if I will answer them all. After a short while, the number of students who want to join the club lessens. Then Tom laughed—

    “They don’t want to answer the questions because there’s no ‘Danny’ in it!”

    Because of the sudden backing out of a big number of students, Anna became the first one who will answer the questions…

    I can’t really hear her answers because I’m stunned, super stunned. She’s really, indeed, so wonderful and sweet.

    “Hey Danny, are you alright?” Tom asked me while waving his hand in front of my face

    “Oh, me? Yeah… I am… I think—“

    “Wait, it’s my turn now”

    “Okay, good luck”

    Tom’s answering now. I want to listen but someone caught my attention. A guy with a hood, the same guy who saved my life… I immediately ran to him because I have this intuition that he’s Dougie—

    “Dougie?”

    “Dougie? Who is Dougie, Danny?” A guy—who I honestly don’t really know…

    “Oh, I’m sorry, I thought—“

    “By the way, my name is Toni. I know we met each other this morning.”

    “Um… Toni, thank you very much for saving my life… I—I gotta go…”

    No. It can’t be. The guy who saved me this morning is not Dougie. But—What if he’s not really Dougie? Well, I think it’s just a product of my imagination since I’m not really awake that time. Still, it’s really too bad that it’s not Dougie. And I went back—

    “Danny, you alright? You look so exhausted.” Anna asked me…

    “I am—UGH! I can’t lie anymore. I’m not really okay…”

    “What’s the problem? C’mon, share it with me…”

    “I almost hit by a car this morning. And there was this guy who saved my life.”

    “And you know that guy?”

    “I thought I know him… But he wasn’t. The guy who saved my life is not my long-lost brother. I thought I will finally be with him. I thought my long search for him is going to end now… But—it’s all… just my thought.” And I laughed with no such reason. But Anna’s serious…

    “Do you really want to look for him?”

    “Yeah… of course…”

    “Are you sure?”

    “Yeah—“Wait, what’s happening? I know I’m sure that I really want to look for him but her question is strange… “What do you mean of that question? That you can’t see I’m really sure that I want to look for him?”

    “You said that, not me…” She’s still serious.

    “Anna—“

    (Breathes deeply) “I’m—I’m sorry for my seriousness. It was just because—just because—“ (Thinks deeply) “Danny, do you have any idea where’s Dougie right now?”

    “Eh? Why?”

    “I want to… I want to help on looking for him”

    “Really? But why—“

    "Because I want to help you” And smiles. Well, she got a point but—no, seriously, I want to know why. Wait, does it mean that we’re going to search together? I think there’s someone that will interrupt my moment with her—

    “Hey, did I just hear a search? Can I join?” Just expected, Tom also want to join the search for Dougie

    “Oh sure” Yet, Anna agreed…

    But it’s okay; at least there are some people who are willing to look for him. Speaking of some people, where’s Harry?

    “Danny! Danny! Danny!” Harry came running…

    “What? What? What?” I jokingly asked him

    “Do you know—“ Oh well, he’s serious…

    “What?” So I became serious too—

    “Do you know that the classes are cut because of an urgent meeting of teachers? I mean, just look at the time we have for bonding and everything!” He’s not really serious and jump because of happiness. I didn’t notice that the teacher-in-charge of the “audition” is gone. Well I think it’s because my attention’s just on Anna, Anna, and Anna… Hmm… I guess I must become happy too because of the time…

    “Hello guys! Who want to have a Sleepover?” Brenda asked us…

    “Are guys allowed?” Harry sweetly asked his honey—well they can’t hide it anymore, they looked so on…

    “Of course, so who’s house?”

    “Ours!” Maggie suddenly showed up and volunteered.

    “Are you guys sure of this Sleepover? Because I thought it’s too early for it. And we didn’t know each other yet.” Yeah right, Anna got a point…

    “That’s why we have a Sleepover! To know more about each other!” But Brenda also got a point…

    “So, when?” Harry asked everyone else…

    “Maybe next, next week…” Tom suggested

    “Next, next week?! UGH! I don’t want to wait!” Brenda complained

    “What if we spend this free time on looking for Danny’s lost brother?” Anna suddenly suggested—wait, she’s inviting everyone else on searching? Awww… well… I guess it will be better if we’re many…

    “SURE!” Others agreed. We’re going to search for Dougie, but not just me and Anna…

    “Is it going to be difficult?” Brenda asked

    “Who knows?” A very well-said answer from Harry…

    Yeah, he’s right. Who knows? Maybe this time we’re going to find him…


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    cnung doggie???..aso b un?^^<


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    [FM] LyLe wrote:cnung doggie???..aso b un?^^<

    binasa mo ba yung mga unang chapters?


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    teka basahin ko ulet^^,...nakalimutan q e..^^<


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    [FM] LyLe wrote:teka basahin ko ulet^^,...nakalimutan q e..^^<

    yeah right


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    getz q n kng cnu c doggie^^


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    [FM] LyLe wrote:getz q n kng cnu c doggie^^

    it's dougie... XD
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    Chapter 7


    “Hey guys! I have this idea! What if we search for Danny’s brother—“

    “It’s Dougie” I told Brenda

    “—Oh, sorry. What if we search for Dougie by pair? Like, I and Harry are going to search in the uptown district. Um… do you get my point?”

    “Yeah… so, Anna, can we search together?” Tom invited her—wait! Too quick! Anna… please say no… please say…

    “Um… Sure!” *Sighs* Tom may don’t like Anna but I think Anna likes Tom… or I just really don’t know everything about her…

    After a while, I end up searching for Dougie with Maggie. Well, I think I must learn to socialize with others too, not just to Anna. And we started searching in Downtown—while walking…

    ‘Wow… I never thought Downtown is kind of cool!” Maggie exclaimed

    “Is it your first time here?”

    “Yeah… Shucks… how embarrassing…”

    “It’s okay. It’s my first time too here…”

    “Really?”

    “Yeah…” And we smile at each other.

    “I think we’ll be best friends, too—hey, look! A theater!” Maggie told me while pointing at a certain place…

    “Huh? Where?”

    “There… (Have a deep breath) You know what? I and Anna first met each other in a Theater. She’s one of the Actresses. And I’m really moved by her performance—“

    “That’s when you started liking her?”

    “Huh? What? Uh—I don’t know. Maybe… but it was several years ago… I’m contended that I’m her best friend...”

    I nod while saying “Ahh…” I kind of understand her side. She can’t like Anna because they’re the same. Both of them are girls…

    “Danny, you know what? Maybe Anna likes you”

    “What? Me? Anna likes a guy like me?”

    “Yeah… you’re smart, you’re nice, you’re popular… only few girls in School didn’t like you, like me—”

    “Ahh… you don’t like me because of Anna?”

    “Huh?”

    “You don’t like me because you like Anna? Or maybe because Anna likes me? Or both?”

    “Huh? I mean (She looks like she doesn’t want to talk about the “Maggie likes Anna” thing)… I don’t really know… who knows… maybe someday I will also like you… wait! That’s just maybe… I’m not assuring it, that I will like you…”

    I just smile…

    Maggie’s kind of childish, the playful and nice childish. She’s fun to be with. She’s energetic and cute… did I just call her cute? Well, if I met Maggie first, I think I will fall for her and not to Anna. I just think… (Sighs) I never thought a girl like her will like another girl… another girl like her who is also cute…

    “Danny!”

    “What?”

    “Look! There’s a Police Station there—“

    I forgot! I unfortunately and badly forgot! We’re looking for Dougie and not going out—I mean, hanging out “outside.”

    “Wow, this is a police station? It’s so tall!” Maggie raised her hand to “measure” the height of the Police Station… And I laughed because she’s so innocent—plus cute

    “Hey, why are you laughing? Did I do anything funny?”

    “Oh, nothing, really…”

    “Never mind it… let’s go…” She grabs my hand and pulls me into the Station. No way, I think we’re not just in a Police Station. It looks like an Bureau of Investigation headquarters! Uh… then she went to the information desk… but all of the people there are busy… that’s why instead of waiting for them to finish their business, Maggie told me she likes to explore the building and start by riding in an elevator…

    “Wow! So clean elevator… but it looks like kind of boring…”

    I laughed again… “You really act like a kid…” And I pushed the “close the door” button

    “What?! Me?”

    ‘Yeah… but what I mean is that, you’re like innocent and playful…”

    “Ahh…”

    And she smiles and examines the elevator even though she said it’s boring. I stare at her for a while. What if Anna’s beside me right now? No… if Anna’s my partner in looking for Dougie, she wouldn’t bring me in a place like this… well I guess she will but she will not ride the Elevator, instead she will just wait for the “officers” to finish their business and we will sit on a couch and talk about lots of things… Oh… I forgot that we’re still holding hands…

    Then the lights inside the elevator turned off…

    “Whoa! Oh my God, what happened?” And she took off her hand off of mines…

    “No way… where’s the emergency button?”

    “Here! (She pressed it and kept shouting on the speaker-like thing above the button that we’re stuck inside an elevator)”

    She’s panicked & nervous. I can see it on the way she acts that time.

    “Dang! I think it’s not working!”

    “Maggie, just relax—“

    “But how? What if the elevator went down straight to its limit? We’re dead, swear!”

    “Maggie!” I hold her shoulders and tell her, gently— “Just take a deep breath and think about the things that make you happy… Inhale, exhale...” She followed me and relaxed…

    “Do you think it will be okay?”

    “Yeah… just think positive…”

    “Wait, I just check out if there’s any signal inside—“ She gets her cellphone inside the right pocket of her pants… “Oh no! No signal? UGH!”

    “Maggie—“ I think I make her remember to just relax and think positive when I said her name…

    “Sorry… I just want to call Anna and tell her that we’re stuck here…”

    “Oh… it’s okay. Just relax…”

    “Danny, do you have any idea how long we’re going to be stuck in this place?”

    “I don’t… sorry…”

    Maggie is so scared and lonely. Geez… think of any way to make a girl comfortable, Danny, think! And I smiles and—

    “Maggie—“

    “Danny, you know what, I miss Anna.” My smile disappears… “You miss her too, right?”


    “I—of course I do… I miss everyone outside—“

    Then Maggie holds her head, close her eyes, and talk to me…

    “Danny! How can I get over of Anna?!”

    “Ahh—ehh—“

    “She’s my first best friend in my whole entire life and I freaking like her! I’m in love to a GIRL! UGH!”

    She’s scary at that time… scary like she wants to kill everyone around her, well, I’m the only one around her that time… so I guess I should say, she’s really, very scary at that time… And I’m shock…


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    ay sorry naman...dougie na


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    XD si mia alam na kwento nito eh... hehe... btw, tnx na rin sa compliment Very Happy

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    Chapter 8

    Oh... my... God. Maggie put her hands on my shoulders while her eyes are still closed and kisses me! I feel her tears rolling down her eyes... She’s crying... And she stepped back...

    “I’m sorry Danny... I didn’t mean to kiss you... It was just...” She turned and continues crying...

    My eyes widen. I’m speechless.. I can’t believe Maggie, not Anna, just kissed me... I mean... My first kiss is not my first love!

    “I’m really sorry, Danny... I thought after kissing you, I will realize that I don’t like Anna anymore... But I was wrong...”

    She kissed me because she wanted to get over of Anna? Not only that my first kiss is not my first love, my first kiss is also not because of affection... Oh geez...

    “Danny? Are you alright?”

    She suddenly stopped crying and asked me that... I can’t answer! My mind has a lot of things to say but my mouth can’t talk!

    “Danny?”

    She asked me if I’m alright twenty times and I’m still speechless...

    “Danny? Are you frozen or sick? Hey, Danny?”

    Still speechless

    “Danny?! Are you alright? It’s okay, no one has seen us...”

    Maybe I can answer now... Danny! Open your mouth, open it! Open—

    “Maggie... is I your first kiss?”

    Awt... it’s my first time to talk after my first kiss and I just asked her if I’m her first kiss? I’m crazy... I know—


    “You? My first kiss?” She smiles “Nah... You’re my second kiss.... Tom’s the first...”

    Ahh... so I’m second to Tom—TOM?! You mean, Tom-the-guy-who-said-he-doesn’t-like-Anna-but-he-looks-like-he-did and the-guy-who-idolizes-me-that-he-want-to-be-like-me-someday?!?!

    “TOM?! You mean, Tom who’s always with Anna?”

    “Yeah... Tom... actually, I kissed him too because of Anna. I can’t get over her and he’s the nearest guy around me that time...”

    “Weird... Are you going to make Harry a victim of your kissing bizarre gizmo?”

    “Huh? Harry? I don’t know... who knows...”

    Geez. She’s weird. I can’t imagine her kissing Tom. I mean, I can’t imagine Tom kissing her. And she kissed us because of Anna... I—I really don’t know what to say... My eyes are still big as a Tarsier’s Eyes.

    “Oh, I forgot, we’re stuck in an Elevator.” She chuckles “It’s funny how this elevator made me kissed you...”

    My eyes widen more like they want to pop out of my face. She’s extremely weird. She just kissed me while she’s crying and now she’s smiling and chuckling and everything!

    “Ma—Ma—Ma... Maggie...?”

    “Yeah?”

    “You’re not going to tell anyone about that kiss, right?”

    “Of course... why?”

    “It was just that... if you already have your third victim, maybe you’re going to tell him that I’m your second kiss...”

    “Oh, you made me remember that I also told Tom I will never tell anyone about the kiss... Oops... (Smiles) About your question, I don’t know...”

    “Please?”

    “I don’t know...”

    If anyone from the outside find out about this, especially Anna, my world is going to crash... But I’m sure if Harry found out, he’s going to be happy because at last we’re the same, that our first kiss is not our first love...

    And the Elevator suddenly started to function again

    “Oh... yes! The elevator’s on again! Okay, where’s the 1st floor? (While softly sliding her finger on the floor buttons) Ground floor, 1st floor, 1st—1st floor!” Maggie pressed the 1 button “At last, we’re going out of this hot place” She’s in the mood again. She’s not scary again. But she’s my first kiss! I mean... My eyes are already hurting because it’s still big but I didn’t mind it because I can’t believe that this girl who likes Anna very much is my first kiss! And I surprisingly fainted...

    There I go again... I fall asleep and wake up with someone facing his back on me... I didn’t think twice and I hug that someone... Then that someone turned around, and I’m surprised... it’s not Dougie... it’s Anna...


    “Danny” She called me with a very soft voice “I’m sorry...” And tears started flowing from her eyes “He’s gone...”

    “Who’s gone?” I asked her. I’m curious... I mean, who’s gone? Who is he?

    “Dougie... he’s gone... I’m sorry Danny... I let him go...”

    “Dougie? Dougie’s gone? What do ya—Dougie?” Wait, what does she means? I know this is just a dream but—no, no, please, please not literally gone... PLEASE! PLEASE—

    “DOUGIE!”

    I shouted again Dougie’s name. I woke up with everyone around me... even Maggie... (We’re still inside the Headquarters but not in the Elevator)

    “Hey Danny, are you alright?” Harry asked me worriedly

    “I dreamt about... I dreamt about—“ And then I saw Anna. She’s worried too... But what she just said in my dream is completely weird...

    “Danny, are you alright?” Anna asked me... I can’t believe she just said that in my dreams (But I’m happy she’s in my dream, by the way—)... wait, it’s just a dream! Maybe it’s not real or—

    “Anna, do you know Dougie?” I asked her... Her worried face suddenly changed into a shocked face...

    “Yeah... of course I know him! He’s your brother, right?” She’s nervous and she can’t look into my eyes...

    “Yeah... he is... what I meant is if you know Dougie personally? Even before you met me?” I asked her again... This time, she’s sweating...

    “Anna... please doesn’t tell me you don’t know him before we met each other...” I’m kind of angry because... if she really knows Dougie, why she wouldn’t tell us where is he now?!

    “Danny...” Her voice is like her voice in my dream... “I’m sorry...” She started sobbing... no way... don’t tell me it’s all the same? What happened in my dreams will happen—

    “What if I said yes?” Anna asked me in a very shaky voice

    “I... I don’t know—“

    “Yes... I know him... I’m—I’m sorry... I didn’t tell you...”

    “Is he gone?”

    “Huh?”

    “Is Dougie’s gone?”


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    ay bitin>,<


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    [FM] LyLe wrote:ay bitin>,<

    ganun tlaga... kailangang mangbitin.. parang tv series XD


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